Revolutionaries need revolution as dreamers
need a dream. It’s poetry that gets lost
in translation.
Between the two
Enforced half-light
The candle smoldered
Smoke
Acrid ashen
Perpetually arched
Monument
Of the flame
Heaving
Beckoning
Silent float
Cried out
For
Merely a touch
Merely a touch
Or a whisper
Slightest spread
Of heat
Would provoke
Immediate action
Would provoke
Immediate action
If flame
Approached
This snake
Of smoke
The flame
Would devour
The very ether
A racing return
To surround
Embrace
The wick
Drawing light
Drawing life
Where
He could see her
And she
He
And that
Was the danger
So
Between the two
Enforced half-light
The candle smoldered
Great imagery. Beautiful as usual.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the critique Wally!
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